Talk:Stories from RJ's LOC signing tour, Fall 1994

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I have three points to make about this article:

1.) It's waay too long. It would be well served if someone were to break it into pieces, either by splitting parts of it off into new pages, or by putting dividers with headers in appropriate spots, and adding one of those nifty outline box thingies to the front of the file. There are a number of conversations being recorded in this article, so I find no reason why either course could not be taken. If there is a consensus that this might be desirable, since I brought this up, I would be happy to make the first, ahem, chop, though I will need help on figuring out how to make the outline.

2.) There are a lot of spelling errors, some of them simply a matter of the author working out a word phonetically, some of them simple typos. There are also a number of minor grammar and punctuation errors that need to be cleaned up. I'm mentioning this more for completeness than anything else. If I work on 1.), I will work on this one as well.

3.) There is a lot of repetition in this article--maybe because multiple observations of the same event are included, nevertheless, there it is. If we can cut out the repetition, the article will be greatly improved, IMHO.

Comments, anyone?

Pedantic 18:40, 9 April 2008 (UTC)